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Please do not create new infobox categories. Change the "therapeutic devices" to "torso-mounted".--[[User:Haustein|Haustein]] ([[User talk:Haustein|talk]]) 10:55, 14 October 2015 (CEST) | Please do not create new infobox categories. Change the "therapeutic devices" to "torso-mounted".--[[User:Haustein|Haustein]] ([[User talk:Haustein|talk]]) 10:55, 14 October 2015 (CEST) | ||
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| − | Do not create new infobox categories! | + | Do not create new infobox categories! If you wish to mention the size of the device, move the dimension category inside the Main characteristics section instead. The infobox table should be the very first thing on the page, swap it's place with the introductory paragraph. |
| − | Do not divide the Main characteristics section into new sub-sections (Usage etc.). Use the sections provided by the template. | + | Do not divide the Main characteristics section into new sub-sections (Usage etc.). Use only the sections provided by the template. |
| − | You have many trailing empty lines, such as the one after <code>ADVANCE™ System</code> | + | You have many trailing empty lines, such as the one after <code>ADVANCE™ System</code> line under the Company and People section. This creates an unnecessary empty line. |
| − | The Important dates section lacks references. Ethical Issues section is empty. If there are no ethical issues relevant to the device, | + | The Important dates section lacks references. |
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| + | Ethical Issues section is empty. If there are no ethical issues relevant to the device, write about that too, don't leave the section empty. The same applies to the Relevant projects section. | ||
The reference for the first sentence in the Health issues section is formatted incorrectly. | The reference for the first sentence in the Health issues section is formatted incorrectly. | ||
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There are some confusing expressions and wording throughout the article, for example the expression <code>Except of company's</code>. | There are some confusing expressions and wording throughout the article, for example the expression <code>Except of company's</code>. | ||
| − | You are using the same reference multiple times incorrectly, which in turn creates the same reference multiple times in the References list. Please see the [[Getting_started_on_HCE_wiki#Add_a_reference]] to | + | You are using the same reference multiple times incorrectly, which in turn creates the same reference multiple times in the References list. Please see the [[Getting_started_on_HCE_wiki#Add_a_reference]] to learn how to fix it. |
| + | --[[User:Haustein|Haustein]] ([[User talk:Haustein|talk]]) 09:51, 16 November 2015 (CET) | ||
Revision as of 10:51, 16 November 2015
Please do not create new infobox categories. Change the "therapeutic devices" to "torso-mounted".--Haustein (talk) 10:55, 14 October 2015 (CEST)
Do not create new infobox categories! If you wish to mention the size of the device, move the dimension category inside the Main characteristics section instead. The infobox table should be the very first thing on the page, swap it's place with the introductory paragraph.
Do not divide the Main characteristics section into new sub-sections (Usage etc.). Use only the sections provided by the template.
You have many trailing empty lines, such as the one after ADVANCE™ System line under the Company and People section. This creates an unnecessary empty line.
The Important dates section lacks references.
Ethical Issues section is empty. If there are no ethical issues relevant to the device, write about that too, don't leave the section empty. The same applies to the Relevant projects section.
The reference for the first sentence in the Health issues section is formatted incorrectly.
Pay attention to the correct reference placement. The way it should be is bla blabla.[1] and not bla bla bla [1]..
There are some confusing expressions and wording throughout the article, for example the expression Except of company's.
You are using the same reference multiple times incorrectly, which in turn creates the same reference multiple times in the References list. Please see the Getting_started_on_HCE_wiki#Add_a_reference to learn how to fix it. --Haustein (talk) 09:51, 16 November 2015 (CET)
