Talk:Quell relief

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Please do not create new infobox categories. Change the "therapeutic devices" to "torso-mounted".--Haustein (talk) 10:55, 14 October 2015 (CEST)


Do not create new infobox categories! Move the dimension category inside the Main characteristics section instead. The infobox table should be the very first thing on the page, swap it's place with the introductory paragraph.

Do not divide the Main characteristics section into new sub-sections (Usage etc.). Use the sections provided by the template.

You have many trailing empty lines, such as the one after ADVANCE™ System, after several paragraphs creating unnecessary empty space.

The Important dates section lacks references. Ethical Issues section is empty. If there are no ethical issues relevant to the device, explain that in this section as well. The same applies to the Relevant projects section.

The reference for the first sentence in the Health issues section is formatted incorrectly.

Pay attention to the correct reference placement. The way it should be is bla blabla.[1] and not bla bla bla [1]..

There are some confusing expressions and wording throughout the article, for example the expression Except of company's.

You are using the same reference multiple times incorrectly, which in turn creates the same reference multiple times in the References list. Please see the Getting_started_on_HCE_wiki#Add_a_reference to see how to fix it.